70702 Warp Stinger


  • Nominated by: User:CzechMate/czech 04:19, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I did a major description of the set, background, and added a description from the GS website. If you are opposing it due to length, please remember 5969 got c1, and that isn't extremely long. - Czech

Vote score: ±0, Technical Check: Currently OK

Support
Object
  1. Crown Knights.png It's got some confusing sentences, about twice as many commas as it needs, run-on sentences...and per Cligra. Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 06:57, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
    Please point out where and I am happy to fix it.--User:CzechMate/czech 06:59, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
Technical MoS Check (QCG members only)
  • Needs prices in infobox Crown Knights.png NovaHawk 05:45, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
    • Several are unavailible, therefore, unable to add. --User:CzechMate/czech 05:47, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
Comments

I can't bring myself to oppose, but I definitely won't support until these issues are dealt with:

  • Short lead section that doesn't say much.
  • Spelling and grammar errors.
  • The description is really just one big block of test... Paragraphs, and perhaps pictures?
  • I feel the description for the Warp Stinger could be much longer, but I suppose that's more of a difference in writing style than anything else.
  • Uncaptioned images in gallery
  • Not all prices listed (I haven't checked, but I'm fairly certain all the prices should be findable on LEGO.com?)
  • I would fix some of these myself, but I'm lazy. (oh wait, that's an issue with me...) User:Cligra/Sig