Dementor
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- Nominated by: User:LSCStealthNinja/RealSig
- Nomination comments: Complies with the MoS, describes both variants, large background and gallery.
Vote score: ±0, Technical Check: Not OK
- Support
- Object
The description could do with some small expansion (I know there isn't a lot to add) and the background, as NBS said, is quite a mess.
JeyoLord VladekTalk The Forge 04:05, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Technical MoS Check (QCG members only)
Needs a VG section,background needs a tense change NovaHawk 04:00, February 6, 2013 (UTC)Actually, the background's a bit of a mess in general (spelling, and it's all over the place) NovaHawk 04:02, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
- ^ I was about to say something along those lines.
JeyoLord VladekTalk The Forge 04:05, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Comments
- Fixed Background and added Video Games Section. User:LSCStealthNinja/RealSig
- I think it should be good now, I enlarged the Description by much. User:LSCStealthNinja/RealSig
- Could someone please check this? I added more description, a VG section, and majorly fixed the Background. User:LSCStealthNinja/RealSig
- Neutral I may bandwagon later, but I am not sure now. The description is not exactly at the level I like it, close enough for me to overlook it though. The background, however, though it seems good I was unable to get through it because I see it as nothing but a textwall. Aside from that, I am not so sure of the video games section is correct. I thought that they had a more hybrid appearance 5-7. Berrybrick 20:15, February 12, 2013 (UTC)