Brickipedia:Articles for Rating/Class 1/75000 Clone Troopers vs. Droidekas

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  • Nominated by: Jeyo (talk) 08:23, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I added all the data I could, made it pretty good aesthetically and made sure it complied with the MoS (at least, the MoS I'm familiar with :P). There isn't really a background for this scene, but I gave a background for the individual components. I even added a section and picture on the extra pieces! (Noteworthy only because they're really useful.) For a set of this small size, it is definitely c1-worthy. Jeyo (talk) 08:23, 19 October 2014 (UTC)

Vote score: +7, Technical Check: Currently OK[edit source]

Support
  1. Seems good to me. All the information is there, as far as I can tell. --LK901 19:27, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  2. Information is plentiful, detailed, and useful. BrickfilmNut (talk) 21:47, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  3. This user is a member of the Crown Knights. ToaMeiko (talk) 22:26, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  4. This user is a member of the Crown Knights. NBP3.0 (talk) 22:27, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  5. This user is a member of the Crown Knights. NovaHawk (talk) 09:30, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
  6. Hopefully this will inspire users to make small sets good articles! Soupperson1 Friends are Forever! <3Friends girls.jpg
  7. Looks very good. LCF (talk!) 04:22, 25 October 2014 (UTC)
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Technical MoS Check (QCG members only)
Comments

Looks really great, obviously the best battle pack page we've got. Just a few things:

  • Maybe linking to the parts in the "extra pieces" section would be good?
  • Background should be "in-universe", ie, "The FCC was used in the Battle of Geonosis for...", not "in this scene of Star Wars..."
    • ^Ignore that. Just checked the MoS, it doesn't mention this, so it must just be me making stuff up.
  • "Also unlike previous designs, these Droidekas feature metallic parts." I'm fairly sure the second had metallic parts- I thought the arms were copper and possibly the dome too, and the points of the legs were a silver. Can't find mine to confirm that though, I may be wrong, but at the very least the arms look copper in the image on Droideka.
  • "Attached to these clips are pieces previously used as pistols or fire hoses, but now representing the arms." - The only time I know of where this piece has been officially used as a pistol is for Jango Fett in the second wave of 2013, so it wouldn't be "previously" used. Unless it's used as a pistol elsewhere?

But otherwise support NovaHawk (talk) 23:04, 19 October 2014 (UTC)

  • Good idea, I'll do that.
  • ^
    • I remember there being something about that...even if it isn't strictly in policy, I'll change it because it looks better.
  • You're right, it does - I'll fix that.
  • I thought it had been, but I could be mistaken.
-- Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 00:38, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Everything's fixed. --Jeyo (talk) 05:23, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Ah, I never thought to check Agents for a pistol :) The metallic parts sentence is still unchanged, I would just change it myself but I don't know what to change it to :P NovaHawk (talk) 09:30, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Alright now it's fixed. :P And sorry about the Light Stone Grey thing - I'm used to the MOCer slang of "light bley" and "dark bley". :P --Jeyo (talk) 16:22, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Alright, I'm just going to close this. I'm too impatient to wait one more day and this nom is supported 7-0. So with UCS in mind... 600px-Yes check.svg.png Done. Jeyo (talk) 18:07, 25 October 2014 (UTC)