Brickipedia:Articles for Rating/Class 2/"Where are my Pants?" Guy
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- Nominated by: Soupperson1 (talk) 20:58, 8 February 2014 (UTC) Soupperson1
- Nomination comments:
Too many issues with it. There needs to be grammatical fixes so that it is clear where sentences end. As it is, it looks like the "?" in the page name ends several sentences. There's hardly any information about this character as he appears in the film, when there should be. Sections start out with "He" when it should introduce the subject by their name at the start of every paragraph. The article is also out of date in areas, where it refers to the figure in the future tense (see first sentence of the article). Also, there are two "Background" headings, one of which is out of place per the Manual of Style. --ToaMeiko (talk) 21:06, 8 February 2014 (UTC)- Lacks flow in the description, and what Meiko said. CJC95 (talk) 23:45, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
- Tried to fix some of it up. Hope it works now. BrickfilmNut (talk) 01:41, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
- Verdict
Done. BFN helped this article a lot, definitely worthy of c2. 
NBP3.0 (talk) 15:48, 14 July 2014 (UTC)
