Brickipedia:Articles for Rating/Class 2/70700 Space Swarmer

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• Nominated by: User:CzechMate/czech 06:13, January 12, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Added a description and background for the set, and slight clean-up.

Verdict

Not Done. Weak lead section and the description could use proofreading. It's close, though. Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 06:33, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

So what exactly do I need to do/remove/edit? --User:CzechMate/czech 06:35, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

The lead section should give the number of pieces and say which minifigures are included. The description has some mistakes and false data such as "...is made of predominately dark red on the inside of the ship, and lime green on the outside." There isn't any red on the inside at all, unless you mean the cockpit bubble. The description also makes it seem like the wings sprout from the sides, not the back. "Claw like" should be "claw-like" and "jet-pack" should be "jetpack". Grabber mouth could be reworded. There are also twice as many commas as there need to be. Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 06:43, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, yes: details aren't given about the wings either. They can rotate and move up and down. Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 06:45, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

While completes don't work this way, I would support its status promotion after these changes are made. -User:Nerfblasterpro/sig1 15:05, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

Which they haven't. Archiving. Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 20:10, January 16, 2013 (UTC)