Brickipedia:Featured Article Nominations/Olivia (Friends)

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  • Nominated by: Have a soupy day (talk) 13:03, July 17, 2013 (UTC)Soupperson1 Friends are Forever! <3Friends girls.jpg
  • Nomination comments:We need more FA's and this is the best I can currently offer (Quote by Berry). If you havn't noticed the homepage hasn't changed in months, and when it does change I hate seeing the same FA's over and over again. Wouldn't it be nice to have a female on the homepage? All the minifigures that are FA's are boys. The closet thing we have to a female FA is 3315 Olivia's House put they're is a male in that set. I think it be nice to have just a female once. I don't bring up the subject "Girls don't like LEGO" Friends, is one of the most popular theme and 35% of LEGO buyers buy LEGO.

Vote score: 0, Technical Check: Currently NOT OK[edit source]

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  • Does this mean the Ninjago background to the logo will finally change? MsDtalk 13:17, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
Well if they admins bother too Soupperson1 Friends are Forever! <3Friends girls.jpg
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  1. Crown Knights.png I don't know why this was granted c1, what with all the grammar/spelling errors... -- Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 01:17, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
    Theres no spelling mistakes from what I know, since nothings underlined in red on my computer, mabey they're britsh spellings?, I don't see any grammer mistakes. Berry went over it and fixed those anyway, and I've only tweeked it since then. Soupperson1 Friends are Forever! <3Friends girls.jpg
    There are seven run-on sentences in the description alone, along with several...odd sentences that are a little hard to follow. There's also a lack of an apostrophe in "she's". In addition to that, the whole description seems somehow...rushed. I haven't yet bothered to read the background or anything else, due to this. Perhaps you should not rely only on your computer's spell-check and proofread things yourself as well? -- Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 09:30, August 4, 2013 (UTC)
    I do proofread it :P, theres not really much to say about her in the description, most of her varaitions just have a torso with hearts. Soupperson1 Friends are Forever! <3Friends girls.jpg
    Fixed some stuff in description, will look at rest later. ~ CJC 11:31, August 4, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Crown Knights.png Seems like a good C1 article. Not quite featured though... Klagoer
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I'm staying neutral as I believe CJC's love for Friends will motivate him to get this page FA approved. -User:Nerfblasterpro/sig1 17:08, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

  • Most of it looks alright now, but it still just doesn't feel like an FA to me...majority rules, though, so if everyone else likes it go ahead. :P -- Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 02:40, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

X mark.svg Not Done. -- Jeyo Lord VladekTalk The Forge 08:45, December 3, 2013 (UTC)