Brickipedia:Featured Article Nominations/41078 Skyra's Mysterious Sky Castle

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• Nominated by: {{SUBST:User:Soupperson1/Sig}} (talk) 12:58, 10 July 2015 (UTC)Soupperson1 ^{Friends are Forever! <3}
• Nomination comments:Idealy we should have a new FA each month, I think this fits the bill perfectly. Plus we haven't had a set FA since Janurary 2013.

Vote score: +4, Technical Check: Currently OK

Support

1. Looks great.-- Sibo the First (talk)
2. (Still think it could benefit with subheadings in the description, but maybe that's just me :P) Looks great overall though. NovaHawk 12:34, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
3. This looks great. The descriptions on the article are very detailed and it has sufficient images and information. LCF ^(talk!) 19:57, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
4. Vasko (talk) 11:07, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
5. Berrybrick (talk) 12:21, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
6. Nexus

Make Class 1 instead (this counts as an oppose to FA, but a support for C1)

1. Voting this until Nova's concerns are addressed (and I'll have to review some other grammatical points myself later). BrickfilmNut (talk) 16:20, 13 July 2015 (UTC)

Object

# Only really the first point, the others are just suggestions and I didn't see a point in writing stuff in a third section: #* 52 cases of "There's" - this sounds unencyclopedic #* Maybe consider subheadings for the description, like a different subheading for each part of the castle? #* Background section: "The shop description suggests after...." - an "out of universe" reference- if it happened, just write it like it did actually happen #:Other than that and the technical check, support, you've been doing a lot of really great work with article content Soup :) NovaHawk 13:24, 13 July 2015 (UTC)

We don't have subheadings on most (if not all FAs) Soupperson1 ^{Friends are Forever! <3}

It's just a suggestion to break things up and make it easier to read- it's a bit of a giant text wall at the moment. Like I said, I'm not opposing for that reason, I just couldn't be bothered writing it in another section :P NovaHawk 23:41, 13 July 2015 (UTC)

Technical MoS Check (QCG members only)

• "41078 Skyra's Mysterious Sky Castle is an Elves set first released on June 1, 2015 in Europe, and on August 1 everywhere else'" - untrue. This set is available on S@H everywhere except in the US and Canada that I can see (available in the UK, Australia, New Zealand, etc. I haven't checked aboslutely everywhere though). I don't know when it was released there, so I can't fix it.
• "A technic pina with a brick yellow cylinder" - I think this means "pin" but I'm not sure. Don't want to change it in case it's wrong.
• Lots of redlinks for parts, most if not all of these should be taken care of
• Image captioned "The set displayed at Toy Fair" - which Toy Fair?

NovaHawk 13:24, 13 July 2015 (UTC)

Comments

• @Soup's last edit summary: I'm not ignoring it, I just need time available so I can take a good look at it in one go. Should be able to do that in a day or two. NovaHawk 12:42, 12 July 2015 (UTC)

Oh okay :P Just making sure Soupperson1 ^Jeepers!

Thanks for the constructive critism Nova! I did all the technical check stuff and I'll try and fix your problems. Soupperson1 ^Jeepers!

I fixed the majority of the there's, if there's (get it :P) still an access amount let me know. Soupperson1 ^Jeepers!

• Five redlinks is still kind of a lot (for an FA, I'm being pedantic I know, but it's an FA, so...). I made one part page earlier, I'll try to remember to make pages for the others when I get the time. NovaHawk 12:34, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

All the red links are gone. :D Soupperson1 ^Jeepers!